THE WINNERS ARE:
ELLEN PAGE
ELIJAH WOOD
thank you for your votes!
FADE IN:
In a two-room apartment which hasn't seen a cleaning hand in a week, a young, disheveled WOMAN and a well groomed MAN around the same age are ARGUING.
INT: MAKESHIFT BEDROOM/LIVING ROOM
LIZA
I just need two thousand.
GRAHAM
No way, Liza. Why don't you
get a roommate?
LIZA
(rolling her eyes)
And where, may I ask, is she
supposed to sleep? On top of or
in the refrigerator?
Graham paces around pieces of clothing strewn on the floor.
GRAHAM
How much do you owe me now?
LIZA
I'll let you know on the way to the
bank.
GRAHAM
How much would it take to end this
friendship?
LIZA
Two thousand.
FADE TO BLACK
**written by petra michelle**
In a two-room apartment which hasn't seen a cleaning hand in a week, a young, disheveled WOMAN and a well groomed MAN around the same age are ARGUING.
INT: MAKESHIFT BEDROOM/LIVING ROOM
LIZA
I just need two thousand.
GRAHAM
No way, Liza. Why don't you
get a roommate?
LIZA
(rolling her eyes)
And where, may I ask, is she
supposed to sleep? On top of or
in the refrigerator?
Graham paces around pieces of clothing strewn on the floor.
GRAHAM
How much do you owe me now?
LIZA
I'll let you know on the way to the
bank.
GRAHAM
How much would it take to end this
friendship?
LIZA
Two thousand.
FADE TO BLACK
**written by petra michelle**
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8 comments:
I'm not sure on who should play the male role, but the female should definately be keira knightly.
This is such a cool idea. can't wait SANDY
Thank you for your comment, Sandy. But there's a poll. Would you care to vote? Petra
unable to vote would not accept sk
I have voted but I m afraid my tastes are completelky standars.
Nice little snippet. It took me FOREVER to figure out how to write dialog. And even still I sometimes stumble.
PS: Thanks for the link (which gave me reason to stumble upon you)!
Elijah and Ellen? Nah....they're both too cute! And together? We'd all die of too much youth and beauty.
:) Glad to have you visit. Come back anytime, petra michelle!
Neat-I like it! Makes me want to read about the ride to the bank.
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